final feedback
Hi Marisa,
Your page is developing well and I look forward to reading it all later. I think you have done a great job covering the topic. I really like your choice of photographs, I recognize how it may have been difficult to find images that illustrated the text well but were not difficult to view.
In my most recent read of your page I just found a small thing you could change in one of your hyperlinks. In the section "Genocide" the link to the "crime of aggression" would read better if the word "the" was not included in the link.
Great job so far!
All the best, -H
Thanks Hannah! It has been changed.
MarisaParker (talk)