Introduction

Hi Jessica,

I like the changes you have made so far, I think your structure is looking improved! A recommendation I have is to make your first overview paragraph start out by stating in basic terms what Freedom of Information is. Your current introduction is good as an introduction, but I think a leading explanatory statement is also important in a wiki-style. The definition section doesn't need to change, I think it's fine to go into a more detailed description of what FOI is in the body.

I think your recommendation is a good one. I will attempt to modify my first sentences to reflect the definition of FOI, while elaborating the definition part down below. Thanks!