Canadian Context

Canadian Context

Hi Jessica,

Your wiki page is looking really great!! I have a couple of minor questions/suggestions. First, since it appears you are approaching this from a Canadian perspective (and I apologize if I'm wrong), it may help mentioning that Canadian context sooner in your introduction and adding that it will be more than just "examples from a Canadian Context." As someone who isn't Canadian reading it, I mistakenly didn't make the assumption when reading the first part of your introduction that is was mainly about Canada, so I would have liked to know sooner. And maybe that was just me, and no one else has that problem!

Also, you mentioned BC legislation briefly, and that other provinces have their own access to information of freedom legislation. Are the other provinces' legislation significantly different enough to mention? Would they add much to the wiki, or not be worth discussing?

MorganClendenning (talk)22:32, 28 March 2015

Thanks for the tips, Morgan! Yes, I will try and rephrase the introductory paragraph to more accurately reflect the contexts I will be mentioning in my wiki- I will need to juggle around a few things. And as for Provincial Legislation, good question. I had originally thought it was beyond the scope of my wiki to delve into that, but let me think about that some more...

TungJessica (talk)07:41, 29 March 2015

Jessica, I really like the edits you've made to the introduction. Its more clear now that a Canadian context will be applied to the entire page. Great work.

MorganClendenning (talk)19:41, 29 March 2015