some ideas

Hi Shyla,

Thanks for the comment. I had not heard of Rhizome's Art Base before. I will definitely check that out. I used your suggestion of explaining what the term "fine arts" and "visual arts" is usually used to represent, as well as provide a reasoning on why I have chosen to use "visual arts" more consistently throughout the page. In some ways, it seems similar to the whole argument between what constitutes "high art" and "low art." Personally, I think it is an arbitrary distinction, based on what one person or a group of people determine to be "good," but, of course, this is always subjective. Anyway, thanks for the suggestion.

Thanks again for your suggestions and comments

hi, it does seem to provide a bit of useful context at the beginning, I like the introduction. The other thing I would suggest is to remove the colons (:) after the headers. I don't think they are necessary on top of the formatting that already distinguishes them, and end up being a bit distracting for the reader. At least for me, anyways. Good luck with the final week of work...