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Hey Jason !

your page looks great and was a really interesting read! I would suggest however when introducing someone such as Meryl C Crayton - maybe say something right off the bat about who they are.. I was left wondering why they had authority to comment.. and this could easily be fixed by saying something like Archivist Meryl C Crayton. I only noticed this once i was in further sections and I was wondering who this person was. so not a real problem just something i noticed! Your page looks great!

Morgan,

Thanks for the comments/compliments. I have now added introductory phrases to all (I hope!) of the people I make direct reference to on my page.

- Jason