A second readthrough

A second readthrough

Again, awesome page. Hard to find constructive feedback so I only have small suggestions today :) -move your citation 6 (Furness) to the following sentence, the one beginning with 'Amy Furness suggests.' I reached the end of it and expected a citation which was actually in the previous sentence -giving an example of Mixed Intentions might be useful as I'm not quite sure what you mean in that section -The Mark A. Landis story is cool! -I suggest providing a bit more context/discussion in your section on professional partners. What sort of responsibilities/benefits do these partnerships have? How do they differ between institutions? etc.

AdenaBrons (talk)22:52, 5 April 2015

Thanks for the compliments. I am equally impressed with your page.

Good catch on the #6 citation. I will definitely move that to the next sentence.

As for professional partners, a lot could be said in that section. Perhaps even a ARST wiki topic itself. If I have any time I will try to add a brief paragraph or so about them. However, honestly, I don't exactly think the chances of me having "free time" to do that is likely to happen. Of course, I acknowledge that you are right, but when two big projects are due at the same date, as I am sure you know yourself, unfortunately some things have to be lost in the shuffle.

JasonMartin (talk)08:04, 9 April 2015