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Grammatically this is really solid though where you say “crossover between both areas: they both share” I feel like there should be a period after “areas” making two separate sentences. I could be wrong on this but in my head it would flow better. Also, you might be using 1 too many quotes. I notice that most wiki pages have a few but I think a few less in your future sections would be helpful for non-archivist readers. Putting those ideas into your own words and simplifying them can reduce clutter and help the flow of the page in my opinion. You are using citations and references really well, and can continue to slap a reference to whatever you say in your own words that are based on ideas from your sources That way people can understand the concepts easily without having to closely analyze quotes and still know you are being credible and your words are backed up. Images that can portray advocacy might prove difficult to find, perhaps a video example would prove useful. Anyway, fantastic job, wish I had more helpful advice but this is all I could think of for now. Keep up the good work.

Thank you for your kind advice Eric. On the contrary, you have provided very helpful advice, especially, how you felt as a reader that there are too many quotes; I was myself feeling a bit unsure whether I had too many, but your opinion sealed the deal. Your words of wisdom and encouragement mean a lot to me, so never say you did not offer enough helpful advice my friend. God Bless

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