Feedback

Hey, Victor!

This is definitely a strong start. You go into a good amount of detail, and it's clear you've put a lot of thought into what's there.

There isn't much feedback I feel I can give at this point that hasn't already been covered. A suggestion, however, would be under the activities section. The list you provide is good, but maybe give a short explanation about why each is considered effective? I think it would make it clearer to the reader what the advocate is going for.

Cheers!

Hello!

Alright, I'm going to start this by saying something I'd never thought I'd say: I actually struggled giving your page criticism. Seriously, what you have is really good. I know you have some stuff that you still need to fill out, but my gawd its good.

The one thing I would criticize (After a lot of thought) is the pictures. The pictures you have are good, but there's a lot of them in not so much space. Maybe spread them out a bit more? Or delete a few?

Good luck!

Hi Rosie,

you are too kind, it means a lot hearing that from you, and especially since this is my first time working on a wiki. I always appreciate feedback about layout and readability, and you're comment about the pictures is actually spot-on because I know I got a bit overzealous with the images and was going back and forth whether I had used too many, so it's good to hear feedback about that and I will make the appropriate changes and take out a couple.

Thank you again and I hope you're wiki is going well

Take care,

V