Talk:The Confrontation of Heterosexism in Vietnam

Hi Tammy, Great Wiki page! I found the topic really interesting and the history section particularly informative. I can see you’re still putting the page together, but I have a couple of things I noticed that you may want to look into. First off, there is a double negative in the history section (“not excluding”) which makes the section flow a bit less smoothly than it could. Also, it may be helpful for readers if you explain a bit of the methodology of the study you refer to in the “ideal woman” and “ideal man” sections. Best, Talia