Talk:Neoliberal feminism

This was overall a really interesting wiki to read, with lots of detail and engaging discussion! In terms of things that could be changed or improved, I personally think that the statement of "Neoliberalism is more dangerous because it has evolved into a whole culture, invading the political and social spheres in a more extensive way than liberalism did." in your introduction is quite a bold statement to make, as some feminist critics are still quite in favour of neoliberalism and would hence disagree that it's simply 'dangerous' to feminism. Perhaps this phrase could be reworded a little bit, to something like "neoliberalism is arguably more dangerous" or "Neoliberalism could perhaps be seen as being more dangerous." Also, adding a picture or two would also brighten up the page a big and make it seem less content-heavy on the eyes. Other than that, this is a really good wiki with a clear connection to the material that we covered on the course!

Hey there, thanks for your comment. Whatever I have posted so far on the wiki is a very VERY rough draft. I am definitely planning on rewording some of the more opinionated statements, including the one you pointed out. I have some pictures and videos to add as well, but my immediate goal is to just get the writing out after which I will edit edit edit.

Again, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I would love to return the favor. Please let me know which wiki page is yours.