Talk:LGBTQ+ discrimination in South Korea

Firstly, I noticed a typo in one of the sections describing the LGBTQ+ spectrum - instead of 'bay' I suggest replacing it with 'gay', and making note of the '+' which encompasses other sexualities such as asexual, two-spirited, and so forth. I also think that the section on mandatory conscription could be strengthened, looking at what implications this could have on those that identify as non-binary, or what it could mean for those on the spectrum being able to safely express themselves in such a strict field such as the military.