Talk:GRSJ224/neoliberalism&urbanchange

I appreciate how you added a graph on the influx of Vancouver's population - it was really cool to see and something that I've never had any conscious thought of before. Visually, your wikipage looks great - you have an appropriate amount of text and images to support the facts. I think something you could consider is specifying your topic of choice in an introductory paragraph before you dive into your main thoughts. If you wanted to talk about neoliberalism and urban change in Vancouver/Canada specifically, I think it might be helpful to the reader to specify that in the beginning than providing that near the end of the wikipage