Talk:GRSJ224/Sexism In Bollywood

Hi, I enjoyed reading your detailed and amazing wikipedia page. I like that for each medium that promote sexism such as "songs and costumes", "characters", etc. you brought up several examples that support your argument. I have some suggestions for you. Maybe your page would be more visually appealing if you use some pictures of the movies, etc. I also believe that it is enough to just cite a source in the reference without mentioning the name of the author and year in the text. Finally, maybe you should make a separate heading for your reference section, and also there are some technical errors in your references.