Talk:GRSJ224/Illegal Immigration

Hello! Great content, you provided plenty of details and information about illegal immigration. I believe it would be beneficial to mention a solid definition of immigration. I noticed you bolded this word in your introductory paragraph, if made into a hyperlink that takes the reader to a definition of immigration, it would be a good addition. Also, it might be important to note that some people immigrate illegally out of necessity, and what factors entice people to immigrate illegally.

Overall, Great contribution!

Great suggestion, I will implement that right now!!!!!

Could you maybe include examples of how people are smuggled? This would greatly engage the reader and show how serious the problem is. For example, in recent news, 39 illegal Vietnam immigrants inside a refrigerated truck were found dead.

Hey Raphael! Yes of course, it was also on my agenda to highlight the different methods that people are using to smuggle into other countries. I also read about the tragedy of the Vietnamese migrants who were found dead on the Essex lorry which exposes the conditions many endure in hopes of a better life!