Talk:Designer Babies: The Good and the Bad

Wow Julia. I really like your use of graphics in your Wikipedia page; this is not something I thought would make a big difference to the experience of the reader but it definitely did! It made it much easier to read and more interesting, making me more inclined to keep reading further. I like how you begin by defining what a designed baby is because I honestly didn’t know until reading this and I’m sure other people would be in the same position. I also really like how you separated your wiki page into sections, also making it easier to read but giving it structure! Your references are also great, showing you put a lot of effort into your page. I can really tell that you are interested in your topic. Not only was your page well laid out and informational, it was great to look at! I also appreciated your conclusion since it brings the page full circle and finishes it off nicely. The only thing that I would add to your page is a couple links to further information, since we only had 1000 words I’m sure not everything was said that you would’ve liked, so linking us to further information on the topic could have been a useful tool for us! Apart from that, I have nothing but positive things to say! I found this project a little difficult because I am not very familiar with using this sort of technology and creating such a unique project but it seems to have come naturally to you, kudos! Have a great summer and be proud of your page!