Talk:Commercialization of Feminism

Hi! Just a couple suggestions :)

In your introduction into Neoliberal Feminism you mention topics such as consumerism, girlie feminism, state feminism and market feminism that you claim are important to know in order to understand the third wave of feminism. Although you did expand on state feminism and market feminism, I think you should expand on consumerism and girlie feminism in order to guarantee that your readers know these terms. Providing an explanation would support your argument that the understanding these terms is necessary.

Secondly, adding images to your assignment would make your page more visually attractive. Perhaps you could add pictures of breast cancer related marketing to support your "Cooperation or Stealing?" section.

The topic that you have chosen is not the easiest to explain and you have done a good job. I think you are on your way to completing a great wiki page. Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,

Alessandra Antunes