Talk:Bisexual Visibility
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Hello. I really enjoyed your topic, bisexual visibility in current society. Since your wiki page looks quite different from mine; such as settings, way you talk and described the topic, I really enjoyed your article. I am the person who was kinda afraid of bisexualism, however, your article gave me a interesting point that you recommend a actions toward bisexual visibility. Although I think this page is not done yet, I pretty much like how you wrote on it. Thanks
This is a well written article, and opens up some important discussion points about bisexuality. I think its really interesting that you expanded into talking about woman and men separately, and the differences that they encounter when identifying as bisexual. I am looking forward to reading about your unfinished sections (“media”, “intersectionality and bisexuality”, and “taking action towards bisexual visibility”). I think it would be great for your article to use some examples of well-known bisexual character or figures that have been portrayed in the media? I think giving an example will better help people understand and perhaps see the different ways in which these male and female characters are accepted and portrayed.
I enjoyed how easy it was to read this article because all terms I was unfamiliar with had a very clear explanation. To further improve your article I would expand on the differences in acceptance of bisexual men and bisexual women. It is mentioned that there are less bisexual male role models than females in the media, it would help my understanding to see some examples of these role models for both males and females. This may help make the discrepancy between male and female acceptance more clear by seeing it with examples in the media.