Talk:Adoption

I like you page overall, but I think there are too many breakdowns of categories compared to information provided to each category (ex. 1-2 sentences in category). Fixing this would definitely improve the page!

Hi!

I just finished my edits on your adoption page. I think you did a great job covering a lot of information and I learned a lot by reading it. To explain my edits: I tried to make it easier to follow by modifying the order of a few points and I tried to make it easier to understand by updating some sentences. Then I consolidated your references using the "ref name="xx"" wiki tool. Hopefully they were helpful edits!

I started this thread so that we could have a conversation about what order might be best. I chose a cone going from most general to most personal/individualized information regarding adoption, but maybe you have a different opinion?

Hope you see this!

Ali