Course talk:PHYS341/2018/project/WindChimes

Hi there!

This wiki project is done very well! All the components are thoroughly explained, and includes all relevant information. I particularly liked how you explained the different types of chimes and really dug into that area. The physics section is comprehensive and explains most of the basic principles associated with the wind chimes. Great work!

Only a few small edits that I can suggest. Maybe add some captions to the first two pictures, it can even be as simple as "wind chimes on a roof" for example. Also, I would suggest being consistent with the captions, such as maintaining the use of "Fig. x" for each image. As well, though you do cite it in the references, it might be a nice aesthetic touch to link to external pages (such as the Tintinnabulum) within the text.

Overall, this is a great job on your draft. Looks amazing!

Hello!

I very much concur with Ervin! Some minor inconsistencies like he mentioned with the Figures. You have separate bold subtitles above each paragraph except the opening 'wind chimes', maybe have it above and bold, or remove the bold face? Lastly, The Euler-Bernoulli beam theory I thought could be elaborated on a little more.

Other wise awesome job!