Peer Review

Hi, Great wiki page you definitely have an interesting subject. I would be careful with making sure your arguments are from substantial resources as some of the claims seem a bit more like generalized opinions. Also unless you change your title to be more specific I would expand the argument to more than just the Greek community as right now the argument does not seem substantial enough as when reading the page it appears to me that the argument is "frats can host parties this makes them superior to women and causes sexual assault." However, there are definitely more organizations and places that sexual assault and inequality takes place on campus. It can also be addressed that any UBC student can enter many fraternity parties meaning it is a campus wide issue. I do agree that it seems to be a more common issue within these types of parties, however I think you need some type of actual statistics to back up your argument.