Peer Review

Hi there,

I personally love this topic as I think it is so crucial for it to be recognized more often. I really like the way you laid your page out and the organizing you did it really shows you put time into this! An extra source of reading you could do if you haven't done so already that could make your post even stronger is the controversy within the AMS elections this year and the IFC (Inter-Fraternity Counsel) and the controversy on the topic of sexual assault within the greek system, I think this could strengthen your post even more! I like how you added our university into your post and it is a problem that often goes unnoticed - that in order for sorority members to socialize with other greeks, it takes place predominately within a fraternity house. One small area for improvement I would suggest is maybe making the dancing section a little bit more formal, I know it is difficult to do so because nothing about 'grinding' is formal, but if you can manage a way it would make this post absolutely incredible! Can't wait to see your final result!