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Hello, Thanks for sharing! I think this is a really relevant topic for today, and I recognize both the benefits and dangers of social media for women. The sequence of the information and the background information was a definite plus, but a suggestion would be to add a few sentences to perhaps explore what other dangerous factors there are other than the "role models" on social media that distort our perception of "real beauty." Another suggestion would be to add a few other solutions other than the example of Dove Commercials!

TomoYamaguchi (talk)19:26, 27 March 2018