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Hey!

I found your wiki page to be very informative and thoughtful and most definitely relevant to todays society. I think what you can add to this page are images (not sure if you are able to do this or not) but I feel that especially with your topic that images will make your point even stronger. An example would be, just days ago Lili Reinhart (actress from the TV show Riverdale) posted a before and after photo from Cosmopolitan Philippines which shows how the editors edited her body to be more skinny and more "attractive". If you are able to share this story and post the pictures of the magazine before and afters I feel it will really shock your readers and emphasize your problem.

MarcusLong (talk)04:31, 24 March 2018