Peer Feedback (from Carly Gardner)

Very interesting wiki! You've picked a topic that is extremely relatable for your audience and relevant to this class. I only have a couple of pointers. 1. Be very careful not to overgeneralize. You might want to re-word the first sentence about fraternity houses being "one of the only places where all university students are able to drink alcohol..." - it doesn't sound completely factual (not all university students are of legal drinking age), and the sentence itself is rather wordy. 2. I would also be tempted to reword your section called "Causes of Sexual Violence at Fraternity Parties," - maybe to "An Environment Conducive to Sexual Violence" or something similar. Also - you're going to need some sources to back up the claims you made in that section. I'm sure you're working on it!

You might find this wiki article on style and clarity useful. Check out the sections on peacock and weasel words in particular. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Clarity

Hope this helped!