Peer Feedback

This is an interesting article and a highly debated topic, I like many of the points that you have brought into the debate. My one area of concern would be under the heading “Causes of Sexual Violence at Fraternity Parties”. I think that although we can discuss and come up with potential reasons for acts like this, we cannot concretely conclude any of these as factual. Many of the statements under this heading are assumptions and stereotypes. Whether they are true or not, this section of the article seems to be lacking any academic references, and relies mostly on opinion and judgement. I think it is great to bring this to a point of attention and discussion, but I think that it is important that we cannot generalize and make assumptions without evidence to conclude these ideas (perhaps some statistics or studies that have been done).