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I thought your choice of topic was very interesting and relevant and I enjoyed reading your page! In your overview I would include a citation where it says “most university recorded sexual violences occur at fraternity parties”. I would also say that frat parties are so popular because in the united states the drinking age is 21 so all undergrad students are looking for somewhere to party because they can’t go to clubs. Under the fraternities subhead, I’m not sure if it makes sense to say frats are similar to universities in the comparison you used. I would just say what a fraternity is instead of comparing them to universities. Under the John Enochs case I would explain how this is just one of many cases or explain how this is an example of using “hookup culture” as a defense (the alcohol consumption) that is so prevalent in frats. Is John Enochs in a frat? If so you should say so, and if he isn’t then you should choose a different case to use as an example. Under hegemonic masculinity in the Greek system, I was explain how the greek system is patriarchal. I would include on your page some examples of names of frat parties, for example: “yoga hoes and workout bros”. Almost all names include sexualizing women and therefore gives that expectation from the get go.