Feedback

Hello Thank you for your posting. I felt your posting was very interesting because at UBC we have fraternities and sororities, myself having friends from both. I think for the causes of sexual assault at Frat parties are heavily correlated to alcohol consumption and potential drug use, but I like how you bring up the point of the "hooking up" and how that idea exists which makes many individual think of certain actions of acceptable. I think the overall layout of you wiki article can be laid out a little smoother so it could be almost told in an order or story. I would strongly suggest maybe putting up some quotes from individuals effected.