Peer Review

Peer Review

Hi there! This is a very cool topic, and so topical! Overall, I think your handling of the subject was very well done, succinct and clear for the reader. It is good that you included the origins of the movement and how it developed into what it is in its current form. From the intersectional lens, it was handled well, incorporating the aspects of race (in terms of is founder) and the topics of masculinities within the movement. Perhaps to push this further is to find a source that speaks to the racialized aspect of sexual harrasment/assault.

I know this might be hard considering this movement has only garnered public attention recently, but finding a theoretical academic source on the movement itself would really situate the wiki within a scholarly lens I think. You touch on this a bit, but maybe also elaborate on the controversy around some men admitting that they participated in sexual harrassment/assault and/or the effects and susbsequent response on those who have been accused (are these perpetrators like Donald Trump who denies these allegations, or like Morgan Spurlock?). Have people reacted well to these confessions or denials, or have they condemned them regardless of response?

Really great start, not too much to edit to make this wiki amazing!

ErvinWong (talk)08:25, 23 March 2018