Feedback Comment

Feedback Comment

The topic you chose is an very interesting and informative, while also very relevant to the course. Just a suggestion on formatting, splitting up your sections into concise sections with larger headings might be helpful for the overall flow of your page and makes for a little more clear presentation of your ideas/topics. There is a help page that explains exactly how to do this, which I found very helpful. Additionally, providing wiki links to concepts, in your case such as the wage gap, or anything you think the reader might want to know more about/get a more detailed explanation on, are helpful as well. Hope these suggestions are helpful!

LeahWalden (talk)17:10, 21 March 2018