Peer Review

Hi! I found your Wiki page very interesting. As a Sociology major, many of my classes discuss the gender inequalities in the workplace, but I never really viewed it in the way that you presented your page. You emphasize how many women don't hold the same number of positions as men in the workplace because they don't even apply in the first place. I think that many people just assume that men are overrepresented in the workplace because employers always choose male over female employees, but that choice isn't possible if women don't apply for the job. The layout of your page flows like a journal article which, to me, is unusual for a Wiki page, but it still works. I noticed that in the first paragraph under "The Job Search," you used the word "caucasians." I'm not sure if this is a big deal, but I personally have been advised to try and avoid the use of that word as it "may offend some people." It's ultimately up to you if you want to keep that word in there! Another suggestion I have is to perhaps add more visuals so your page isn't too text-heavy. The text is very informative but it's always nice to have a couple coloured visuals. Good luck and I look forward to reading your finished page!

Saphia