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Hi there, I really enjoyed that you chose this topic to write about as this is a very serious and ongoing problem within our society. The easy access to pornography is becoming easier and easier with time, and this is dangerous as younger and younger children could potentially be exposed to it. Not only this, but with young children being exposed to this, their reality of sexual activities could involve violence and inappropriate behaviour as this is what they are exposed to in pornography. I think the way you structured this and organized it and the way you state your arguments is very well done. The only one thing I see that needs to be fixed is your last title "what Can Be Done In The Future", just make sure the 'What' has a capital W! Other than this I think this post is very well done and I can't wait to see the final post!