Peer Review

Hi,

While looking through our archive for the GRSJ wiki, your choice of topic is very interesting and really stands out. I think that confronting this topic was very bold of you. I find it very well addressed and cut to the point. The sub-topics you have picked are very well defined, and are easily understandable when reading it. My only suggestion to you is developing a stronger conclusion on what could be done. Like what Natalie had also suggested, I think that with a solid stance it could wrap up your argument about sexual violence in pornography very nicely.

Great work!