Peer Review

Hi,

Your wiki topic of sexual violence in pornography is very interesting and I enjoyed reading it. It is a serious issue that many people are often unwilling to discuss. Overall, I think you incorporated various meaningful information on your page. They allow the readers to have a solid understanding of the matter, but it might be helpful to expand on how the other factors you mentioned are contributing to the sexual violence. Perhaps you can elaborate on the effect of society’s gender relation and norms in maintaining the objectification of women’s body. There are also different perspectives regarding the role of male and female in pornography and they can influence people’s diverging approach to violence towards men and women in pornography.