Peer review

Hi there, Great choice in topic! This is a topic that is very important to be aware of and educated in in today's society and ties back into a lot of the things we have been learning about in class. For your final post, I would go back and try to create a better structure of your post. For example, ensuring grammar is correct with correct placement of commas and periods. Another area to go over was the reference page and linking your references into your post by their numbers, so that if you click on that number it will direct you to the reference sheet and tell you which one it came from. Also just making sure the last area you will be speaking about is filled in and complete. I know this is only a draft, but for the final post these things will most likely make a big difference in the grading! As well as if you have time maybe add some pictures in to give it a more visual side for the audience! But it is a very good topic to choose!