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Hi, you have a very good introduction to your topic, and I believe this topic is very critical as this violence is continuing all around the world. That being said, you should compare and contrast the seriousness of this situation in different countries and between different races. You can look at the ways that these countries are trying to improve this situation for women. I appreciate that you provide statistics which is very effective to get an outlook on this situation. You could also maybe add a section about how men are victims of violence as well and the impact it has created on them.