Peer Review

Hello, I enjoyed reading your post. This topic is very interesting and closely connected to our GRSJ 224A course about intersectionality. There is definitely many evident examples of intersectionality upon women in society today. Moreover, intersectionality on race is very evident as well. Not only are females perceived and stigmatized as the more vulnerable, submissive, and inferior gender, race can also negatively affect an individual even more. It is great that there is a movement that aims to publically exploit the discriminations that are placed upon individuals, based on their gender and race.

I would definitely recommend you to create an introduction summary of intersectionality feminism and to further separate your writing into subcategories or sections. That way, it will make the page easier to read and follow along. It would also allow readers to know what the subsection topics are for this wiki page, prior to reading the entire wiki page. From what you have written so far, I would suggest creating subcategories for Double-Standard (include the wage gap and how that ties into not only gender but race), Intersectionality Feminism vs. White Feminism, Criteria to become an Intersectional Feminism, The Effects of the Movement. Nonetheless, great start!