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Hey!

I think overall the topic and information looks good. I think however, you can provide a short biography of the people you mention in the article. For example, who is Kimberle Crenshaw? For people who don't know anything about intersectional feminism, it is hard to understand the significance of her. So maybe add something about how she's a lawyer/ professor, so we can understand why she has so much pull in this area and how she was able to start a movement. As well, a small background of Laci Green and Franchesca Ramsey would be helpful too. Were they put into any situations where intersectional feminism was needed? I think this would really help as it can help us understand why these girls' advice are trustworthy.

And Isabelle noted below, it would really help to organize the topic under different headings!

Tavy Wu