Adding in the Video Testimony and further clarifications

Adding in the Video Testimony and further clarifications

Hey! Very interesting topic you have chosen and so far I think it presents some intriguing content! One thing as a reader I think could be improved would be adding the actual video of Kesha's testimony for the section of 2014 Lawsuit "Video", and if not possible then to give more information regarding it to present a clearer understanding of it. Also, I think you could add a bit more at the end regarding the idea behind "rape culture" (i.e. what it is about outside the context of Kesha and then further integrating this into your argument). All in all, good work so far! Also, I'm not exactly sure if you haven't added them in yet or I didn't check correctly, but I think it is important for you to find some scholarly articles as references for your information. I realize that there are likely no articles or few relevant ones relating to Kesha specifically, but maybe you could look for ones explaining sexual assault, battery, sexual violence, gender violence, etc. and then use that information to apply to Kesha's case.

AlanaHo (talk)19:25, 5 August 2016