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I like the unique idea of Feminism in Rap and R&B. A few recommendations to strengthen the wiki page are.. 1. maybe provide more background information about rap and r&b. 2. a small biography or a description of the artists that you've provided for Rap and R&B would be nice. For example, you've listed Nicki Minaj in the "present day female artists", you could provide some information about how she plays a feminism role in rap. 3. since your topic revolves around music, referencing songs, or lyrics may help the content of your page! :)

AliciaChow (talk)03:27, 24 March 2018

I think that because Rap and R & B are so prevalent in pop culture, you will be able to find a tremendous amount of stuff linked to your topic. I think if you compare the women in this genre to women in another genre it can provide some insight on how different the two are and how they portray women. I really like how you chose to talk about Lil Kim, since she was one of the very first female artist to make it big not the hip hop stage. Im looking forward to reading your wiki once its complete!

GurjaypalMann (talk)07:07, 24 March 2018