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Hello, I really enjoyed your choice of topic. I think you need to include more citations and images. Also, I would go through your page and make sure you consistently capitalize “Aboriginal”, and make sure you’re consistent in either using “Aboriginal” or “First Nations”. I would also go more into detail about the experiences in residential schools. Right now it is quite vague and doesn’t fully illustrate the horror that was experienced. I would also include what is referred to as the cycle of trauma or intergenerational trauma and explain what it is.