Peer Review

Peer Review

Great page! I thought it was very informative and used relevant statistics and sources to support your topic. I like how you connected a number of your definitions to other wikipedia pages if the reader wanted to learn more about that specific topic. Your 'implications' section was really well done and i like how you posed some solutions to address the concerns you brought up previously in your analysis. I think adding some graphics or pictures to your page would break up the text and make it visually more appealing. Maybe you could also include some actual numbers into your information from pertinent studies on the topic. I always find it easier to conceptually understand the impact of wage inequality, for example, when actual figures are included. Just a note on references, your Currie reference is missing the name of the paper

AlexandraBland (talk)18:55, 17 March 2018