Comments

Really enjoyed reading on your topic! I think this topic could have been narrowed down a little bit because it is such a large topic to cover! Since it is just an over view, I would add in more about colonization and the history behind the discrimination towards Indigenous people. I think this would help to set up your article to be stronger and more thorough. I like the layout of it though and I think that all of your categories flow well together. I also think that having some statistics would be great and maybe even some comparisons to what other Indigenous people are experiencing globally!