Talk:GRSJ224 Gender Double Standards In Hockey

I really liked your topic. I thought it may be good to define double standard. I also thought it could be interesting to add a section on the difference of pay wages between the NHL male hockey players and the Female professional leagues. I really licked your real life examples of gender discrimination that you mentioned such as no fighting. Overall I really enjoyed your work and I look forward to reading the end result.

Your topic is very unique! A few things that could strengthen your wiki page are...

1. Define "Double standards", maybe provide a more specific definition. The definition would really help readers to understand the topic 2. Adding pictures would definitely make the page more visually appealing! 3. Make sure to have at least 5 academic sources!!!

Overall, I really like your topic!

Make sure you define what  “double standard” means.

The Title for “Drinking culture (reaction to Canadian women’s team following Olympics 2010)” is quite long I would revise it and make it more relevant to the body text – e.g “Celebration culture and Alcohol” would be a better title in my opinion. Also make sure you get the 5 peer reviewed sources for your wiki page. In addition, I would also in your wiki analyse how intersectionality has an effect on women in hockey. Moreover, I think you should talk about potential solutions or things already being done to this longstanding issue. Or if there is nothing being done, what can we do to alleviate this matter. Lots of good information, but I think the body text for Drinking culture could be condensed so that you can make room for more smaller topics that are important to the case. I think it would be interesting if you explained why specifically the case is that women are subject to these certain rules and how they were originated. Otherwise, this is great start to the wiki. I’m looking forward to reading the final product!