User talk:PhilipAustrom
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Peer Feedback | 0 | 02:30, 27 March 2017 |
Overall a nicely written article with good facts. I think most of the issues I found were grammatical: the "Specifications" paragraph needs some cleaning especially. Also the formatting should be more stylized to typical wiki articles.For example: Picture of the the plastic trombone should be right of the opening paragraph, big headers, and important terms linking directly to other wiki pages.