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Hi! I really enjoyed reading what you had so far on the medicalization of beauty. I just think its so relevant and so important for people to have knowledge on these kinds of things. I just have a few suggestions, sort of relating to what other people have mentioned previously. I think it would be beneficial to expand on the problems with the medicalization of beauty, as well as add a section for the benefits. And within these sections, I think you should go into greater detail and give a few specific examples and include pictures, since the pros and cons are very important aspects in this topic.

Overall, I think you are on to a good start, and I am looking forward to reading the end result.