Feedback

I think you have built a great foundation for very interesting and thought-provoking wikipedia page! However, i do have a couple of suggestions. I think that you should choose either a specific country or region on which to focus your page. It will allow you to be more specific throughout your page, as well as make comparisons between countries. Comparisons are extremely helpful for the reader to understand the issue of medicalization, and I think it would help to take your page to the next level.

Other than that, you are off to a good start! I am very excited to read the final draft!

JustineBearss (talk)21:47, 9 November 2017