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Very interesting read. I cannot wait to read your final product. As an avid rap fan, I am quite disappointed, and even disgusted at the vulgarity portrayed in contemporary rap lyrics. You must continue to expand, particularly on the topic of female objectification. Personally, I believe that the most prevalent issue is the blatant sexism in popular lyrics, which usually resorts around this issue of female objectification.

Another topics that you can discuss is the emphasis of the ideal female body in rap lyrics, and the idea that a female's worth is evaluated by only her appearance. Further, it may be a nice touch to consider the prominence of females in rap music videos and their role as sex objects.

Thank you for sharing your wiki.