Peer Review

Hi,

I really like your topic! Its something that we may not all be acutely aware of on a daily basis but once you begin to notice these patterns in popular movies, these commonalities become apparent. I appreciate how you gave some examples of well-known movies to illustrate your point. I think it would add to you analysis to make a comparison between some popular movies which do not follow this common narrative. Comparing and contrasting elements in such movies would support your argument and make it clear what you're trying to show. In the last section, your discussion of the social cognitive theory was a nice addition! I think you could expand on this a little bit and make more of a clear argument around the consequences of these portrayals in mass media.

Overall, I thought your page was well organized and you make tones of really good points!