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Hello, I really enjoyed your topic. In your introduction I would define what the Indian Act is and its effects. Under perpetuating racism, I would expand on what stereotypes you’re referring to. I would also use an example case of a starlight tour, because I think this is very relevant and explanatory of your topic. I would include and expand on the causes of police violence in Indigenous communities, as i don’t think you’ve included intersectionality. I would also include possible implications and effects or movements working to fix this or raise awareness.