Peer Review

Peer Review

Hi!

I enjoyed reading your wiki draft, you're writing is very to the point and easy to follow. I think this topic is super important and know you'll have a great finished product. I know this is just a draft but definitely make sure to update your references section and include links to them in your writing, it would really suck to lose marks for formatting like that. I like how your first topic is based on very recent events and not sure what else you intend to write about but maybe show how Indigenous representation has changed(or remained stagnant) in Hollywood throughout the years. When indigenous people are included in movies what common stereotypes do they portray. Why do Indigenous people agree to roles that misrepresent their culture and communities? What can be done moving forward? and so on are some subtopics you may want to consider when working on the finished product.

SophiaNicoleHarvey (talk)21:08, 23 March 2018